Merge pull request #86990 from Cochatto/tips-with-better-writing

Author: Maleclypse

data/core/tips.json

@@ -26,9 +26,9 @@
       "Scared of melee?  Throw some things at enemies and use reach weapons like spears.",
       "Makeshift weapons can break easily, but they are weapons, and can be made again.",
       "Not much survives a car at 120mph.  Can you?",
-      "Drugs are great for quick morale boosts and more, but be aware of addiction and overdose.",
+      "Drugs are great for quick morale boosts and more, but beware of addiction and overdose.",
       "Use your map wisely.  Prioritize looting places that will get you what you need.",
-      "Wounds heal over time.  Bandages and antiseptic speeds that up.",
+      "Wounds heal over time.  An antiseptic and bandages speed that up.",
       "Don't get grabbed by zombies.  Their bites can be infectious.",
       "Feeling odd after waking up?  Try eating healthier and your health may improve.",
       "Eat well or your health might suffer.  Fast food is only good in a pinch.",
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
       "Famous last words:  Let's poke this electric zombie with a metal stick.",
       "A full stomach will not solve your starvation.  Give it time and eat regularly.",
       "Be mindful of the environmental protection of your gear.  It can take you places.",
-      "Don't overlook protective gear, like gas masks or turnout gear.  You never know.",
+      "Don't overlook protective equipment, such as gas masks and/or turnout gear.  You never know.",
       "Out of resources?  Breaking or disassembling stuff can yield interesting components.",
       "Temperature affects the shelf life of foods.  The colder, the better.",
       "Frozen food doesn't rot, but may be inedible if not defrosted.",
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@
       "Exercising and being active increases your cardio and therefore your stamina pool.",
       "Long trip ahead?  Auto travel and auto drive to your desired destination.",
       "You can automate repetitive tasks such as foraging, mining, or mopping for your convenience.",
-      "You can crouch or go prone to hide behind objects and reduce the sound you make when you move.",
+      "You can crouch or go prone to hide behind objects and reduce the sound you make when moving.",
       "When you are prone, you use the bipod of your rifle for better accuracy.",
       "Dissecting bodies will help in gaining knowledge about the weaknesses of the opponents.",
       "An armored enemy?  Don't give up, maybe it has some weaknesses that can be exploited.",