Enhance Landing Page Content for Clarity and Professionalism #603
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Signed-off-by: Rushabh Shah <[email protected]>
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Thank you for your contribution, @Iamrushabhshahh! I'll quickly review this and get back to you soon. |
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@ruquanzhao, Thank you. I'm currently tied up with some work, so I won't be starting anything new for the next couple of days. I plan to pick something up over the weekend if there’s anything you'd like to change, feel free to let me know and I can adjust it on the go and wrap up the PR quickly. |
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| "home.platformengineering.3": { | ||
| "message": "An efficient collaboration paradigm between App Developers and Platform Engineers" | ||
| "message": "An efficient collaboration model between app developers and platform engineers." |
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I want to capitalize 'App Developers' and 'Platform Engineers' because these terms are important concepts in the Kusion.
And I really don't know how native English speakers perceive the word paradigm. Could you explain it to me？
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| "home.easyshipping.2": { | ||
| "message": "Environment-agnostic application configurations" | ||
| "message": "Environment-agnostic application configuration for seamless deployment." |
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| "message": "Environment-agnostic application configuration for seamless deployment." | |
| "message": "Environment-agnostic application configuration." |
How about making the sentence shorter and more readable?
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| "home.easyshipping.3": { | ||
| "message": "Standardized and flexible platform configurations" | ||
| "message": "Standardized yet flexible platform configurations tailored to your needs." |
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| "message": "Standardized yet flexible platform configurations tailored to your needs." | |
| "message": "Standardized yet flexible platform configurations." |
Same reason as above.
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| "home.easyshipping.4": { | ||
| "message": "Kubernetes-first, lightweight and user-friendly" | ||
| "message": "Kubernetes-first, lightweight, and user-friendly for modern workflows." |
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| "message": "Kubernetes-first, lightweight, and user-friendly for modern workflows." | |
| "message": "Kubernetes-first, lightweight, and user-friendly." |
Same reason as above.
This PR refines the landing page content to improve clarity, grammar, and overall professionalism. The previous content contained typos, grammatical inconsistencies, and unclear phrasing, which have now been corrected for a more polished and user-friendly experience.
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Issue Reference:
Fixes (#602)
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