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Some minor comments.
In any case thanks for the proof-reading, much appreciated.
| Any Cosmonaut can also become a Citizen of the AtomOne Hub by using their | ||
| address to stake ATOMs toward the AtomOne Hub and participate actively in | ||
| governance. The status of citizenship is granted in an autonomous manner. | ||
| governance. The status of citizenship is granted autonomously. |
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Do you really believe autonomously is better here? the difference is subtle, but to me in an autonomous manner seems more explicit
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I believe "autonomously" makes more sense here.
| even buy, but simply bond the capital of the market cap of VISA, of $391B. | ||
| That’s a lot of money, but if bonding that capital means one can take control | ||
| over the financial system, people would lend their money in a heartbeat. But | ||
| of the financial system, people would lend their money in a heartbeat. But |
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maybe, but over is a bit more impactful here, simbolizing a top-down strings-pulling.
Maybe I would leave it as is
Can you reply with some example? AFAIK, everywhere ATOM is mentioned, it's because it's supposed to be ATOM and not the ATONE token. |
Co-authored-by: Giuseppe Natale <12249307+giunatale@users.noreply.github.com>
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I have checked again thoroughly, the readme file does not have any Atom/Atone anomaly in the current version. |
Co-authored-by: Giuseppe Natale <12249307+giunatale@users.noreply.github.com>
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Minor corrections and formatting. In many places, the token of AtomOne is referred to as ATOM/ATOMs, If not intended, it should be changed to ATONE/ATONEs.