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@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ For over a decade, id3as has served as a technical consultancy building scalable
 
 Their technical background primarily resided in the realm of financial services, utilizing C#. Previously, they had also gained experience in developing large-scale retail systems. However, as they entered the domain of media system development around 2010, the notion of "big" underwent a profound transformation. They went from a dozen servers driving an online bank to, at times, thousands of servers delivering live media across the globe.
 
-They embarked on a search for technologies that could fulfill their requirements. Erlang emerged as an incredibly well-suited solution. This marked the starting point of their journey, they strongly believe that Erlang represents best in breed for high availability and high scalability.
+They embarked on a search for technologies that could fulfill their requirements. Erlang emerged as an incredibly well-suited solution. This marked the starting point of their journey, and they strongly believe that Erlang represents best in breed for high availability and high scalability.
 
 id3as is the company behind [Norsk](https://norsk.video "Norsk") - a low code solution that allows users to build even the most complex of video workflows and deploy them at any scale. Remarkably, customers have reported replacing tens or even hundreds of thousands of lines of C++ code with a mere fraction of the code while still delivering the same functionality at the same or even better density and energy efficiency.
 
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 #### About sponsoring the foundation
 
-Id3as has recognized the important role of Erlang as a significant and consistent differentiator for the company. Consequently, they decided to become a sponsor of the Foundation, aiming to support the ecosystem and foster greater adoption of BEAM-related technologies. They firmly believe that this sponsorship indirectly contributes value to id3as.
+id3as has recognized the important role of Erlang as a significant and consistent differentiator for the company, one of the reasons they became a founding sponsor of the Foundation, aiming to support the ecosystem and foster greater adoption of BEAM-related technologies. They firmly believe that this sponsorship indirectly contributes value to id3as.
 
 Looking ahead, they would like to promote Purerl and the benefits of strong typing on the BEAM. They proudly shared that Purerl has been successfully used in production for many years now, comes with an entire supporting ecosystem (from PureScript) and offers very straightforward FFI into Erlang itself. They recall that the adoption from within the PureScript ecosystem is encouraging (it is the second most popular backend behind Javascript) and they would love to see members of the Erlang community benefit from it as well.
 
 #### A little more about id3as
 
-Id3as is headquartered in England, with their CEO Adrian Roe, CTO Steve Strong, and Chief Business Development Officer Dom Robinson all based in the country. The company's team of developers is geographically distributed across various locations, including England, Scotland, Finland, and the United States.
+This company is headquartered in England, with their CEO Adrian Roe, CTO Steve Strong, and Chief Business Development Officer Dom Robinson all based in the country. The company's team of developers is geographically distributed across various locations, including England, Scotland, Finland, and the United States.
 
 Notably, id3as actively contributes to the growth of the PureScript and Purerl ecosystems. They have written and open sourced numerous libraries such as Stetson (type safe binding on top of Cowboy) and Pinto (strongly typed version of OTP constructs such as gen server and gen statem).