Merge pull request #38 from dejenerate/patch-14

Update reference-document-variables.md

docs/docs/reference-document-variables.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ title: Document Variables & Types
 
 ## Fast Intro
 
-As Adama is [a data-centric programming language](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Data-centric_programming_language), the first order of business it organize your [data for state management](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/State_management). At the document level, state is laid out as a series of fields. For instance, the below Adama code outlines three fields:
+As Adama is [a data-centric programming language](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Data-centric_programming_language), the first order of business is to organize your [data for state management](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/State_management). At the document level, state is laid out as a series of fields. For instance, the below Adama code outlines three fields:
 ```adama
 public string output;
 private double balance;
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ These three fields will establish a persistent document in JSON:
 {"output":"","balance":0.0,"count":0}
 ```
 
-The [*public* and *private*](/docs/reference-privacy-and-bubbles) control what people will see, and the omission of either results in *private* by default. In this case, people will see
+The [*public* and *private*](/docs/reference-privacy-and-bubbles) modifiers control what users will see, and the omission of either results in *private* by default. In this case, users will see:
 ```js
 {"output":""}
 ````
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@ The syntax which Adama parses for this is as follows:
 
 **such that**
 * _privacy_ when set may be *private*, *public*, or anything outlined in [the privacy section](/docs/reference-privacy-and-bubbles). In this context, *private* means only the system and code within Adama can see the field while *public* means the system, the code, and any human viewer may see the field. [The privacy section](/docs/reference-privacy-and-bubbles) will outline other ways for humans to see the field.
-* _privacy_ when omitted results in a default value of *private* which means no humans can see the field.
-* _type_ is the type of the data; see [types for more details](#types).
+* _privacy_ when omitted results in a default value of *private* which means no users can see the field.
+* _type_ is the type of the data. See [types for more details](#types).
 * _expression_ when provided will be computed at the [construction](/docs/reference-constructor) of the document.
 
-The privacy policy of this document is limited and lacks data that people want to and should see. This is unfortunate, but can be corrected by changing the document to.
+The privacy policy of this document is limited and lacks data that users want to and should see. This is unfortunate, but can be corrected by changing the document to
 ```adama
 public string output = "Hello World"
 private double balance = 13.42;
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ which results in the document persisted and viewed by all with slightly more mea
 ```
 
 ## Built-in Types
-Adama has many built-in types, and the following tables outlines which types are available
+Adama has many built-in types, and the following tables outline which types are available.
 
 | type | contents | default | fun example |
 |  --- | --- | --- | --- |